Interview With Ustad Gulam Rasool khan REFERRED BACK

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Interview With "Ustad Gulam Rasool khan"

He was born in 1956 , at District dadu , talka K.n shah in small village "Sevo chandio" , Who was son of " USTAD MOHAMMAD MITHAL KHAN" , and her mother name "Mismat KODI ".
in the age of 5 years,  he got admision in a government school of his village "Sevo chandio"
he studed till 5 classes, and he was considered in a brilliant students of his school .

The father of Ustad Ghulam rasool khan who was a  great singing teacher , and his uncle Ustad "lutuf ali khan" who worked in radio hyderabad at that time and he haded the old books of hindustani music record regarding classis music , after his death those books were given to the father of "ustad ghulam rasool khan" , and "ustad gulam rasool khan" started learning music from his father with the time , due to some family problems he had to leave education at the age of 10 years .

and his father also had wish that ghulam rasool khan should be a successfull singer in the future . and his younger brother abdull sattar khan , who had intrest in playing sindhi dholak.

then slowly wtih the time both brothers started growing together , with the time they started working in a pair, where ustad "Ghulam rasool khan" use to sing and his brother "Ustad Abdul sattar khan" use to play "sindhi dholak" , at the age of 15 "Ustad ghulam rasool khan" performed his first singing debue at the festival of dargah syed judyal shah . where he got his first award of singing among 10 singers who were also participant of that festival . then after that his father sended him to a singing teacher ustad Ghulam hussan mirasi who use live  in sehwan sharef . and for the 5 years of his life he stayed at the home of ustad ghulam hussain mirasi and learned classis music . and after that a big tragidy of his life took place where he was given sindur in paan by his close friend due to field jealousy . after that he went to many hospitals of different cities but was helpless and could not sing further due to the sindur in paan . then in the last he went to his music teacher "ustad ghulam hussain mirasi " who showed complete symphty and cryed even for his tragidy , and then he adviced his "ustad ghulam rasool khan" to stop singing and start giving the music education which he got from his father " mohammad mithal khan" and his another music teacher "Ustad ghulam hussain mirasi" and with the happiness of his father and mother he got married with his own cousin . from which he had 5 kids , 3 daugthers and 2 sons and then he started his teaching school in which he made his real son " Roshan ali" his first student , but due to his less intrest in singing he decided to play "sindhi dholak" , and ustad ghulam rasool khan who was expert in playing all instruments like " Dholak , Harmonium , piano , tablo , and singing . givin him education of dholak and singing . then his 2nd student was "sajid mangi" who learned for 4 to 5 year at "ustad gulam rasool" home , he learned singing and became expert and with time he started working on sindhi T.v channels as play back singer  . and then with the time he got engaged with another women and had an love marriage with a lady which belong to punjab province city sargoda name as "Parveen haidry" from his 2nd wife he had 4 daughthers and 3 sons . and then "ustad Ghulam rasool khan" started giving lessons to his whole childrens from both marriages , but the successfull chidrens from his family were his elder daugther "Kousar Parven" and at 2nd no "Sanam marvi" , "reshma parven " , His elder Son "irfan ali khan" Who is "table nawaz" after geting his basic of "Tabla from his father "Ustad Ghulam Rasool" he was sent to "Ustad baba Nazir khan" and he learned for 12 years and got expert in "Tabla" And Her Elder Daughter "Kousar parven" who performed at various stages and was a successfull in whole sindh  but due to his marriage she had to leave the field of singing and she is house wife now . and at 2nd sanam marvi who is a international name and play back singer of pakistani dramas and who is visiting various countries day by day "America , india , london , german , japan , south korea , nigarea and etc , and their younger daugther "Reshma parven is also a big name in sindh , she is also working in sindhi tv channales as play back singer .  and his younger son "IMRAN ali KHAN" who had an intrest in harmonium and was send to Big name of world in harmonium "USTAD AMANAT GUL" , after completing his 7 years of harmonium lessons , he is now successfull singer and a wonderfull harmonium player of sindh and then his last son " AHsan ali khan" Who is a Live performer and playback singer , "Ahsan ali khan" learned his music education from his own father " Ghulam Rasool khan" .

After making his whole family , students succesfull he is running a music school at "Al shafi colony , Sabzi mandi naya pull hyderabad and he use visit differenet contries at anytime with his chidlrens as a "ustad " A "GUIDE" , and he has started learning even at the age of 52 from "USTAD ghulam rasool khan" is now student of "Ustad Fateh ALi khan" and learning more music from him .
His words were " THe music is like a big sea , how much you learn is less in music "
if you spend you whole life in it even then you can never learn complete study of music .


Accievements : he was A successfull composer , Who worked in all radio pakistan and in Television , he has performed all yearly suffi festivals like "Latif sarkar mela halla , Sachal sarmast mela qambat , qalandar shehbaz mela sehwan sharef , baiidil sain mela sukkur rohri, suffi shah inayat jhok sharef near badin , misri shah tando alhayar , chizal sain balochistan , budha sain shikarpur , lookvisra islamabad .

And have performed for 4 years in ewane saddar islamabad
dubai , istambol , bosniya , qattar , algeriya , africa , turkey .

and he is finaly waiting for final acchievement named as " presedent awards "

Feature / Hyderabad Gymkhana

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Kamran sario
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4. ur piece is around 670 words of them there are over 100 spelling mistakes, which could have been corrected by running dictionary. (Some of them I have corrected)

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Feature / Hyderabad Gymkhana

Hyderabad is 2nd biggest city of sindh and also a city with a lot of entertainment places and shopping stuff, In Hyderabad their are many places for found for public entertainment  and Hyderabad gymkhana is one of the best place found for entertainment in Hyderabad city , which is spread in 4.692 Acres and located on main Thandi Sarrk ( Shahra-e- Fatima Jinnah. , Gymkhana was found in 1897  which has grown to a membership strength of about 6000 in 2013. It is basically upon membership concept and none of local peoples can enter in it without membership. 
Due to costly membership, unaffordable local peoples of city Hyderabad can not enter there . and it is famous in Hyderabad due to The class of peoples mostly high gentry families , high profiled peoples are found in Hyderabad gymkhana . it is place Which is full of entertainment and with alot of facilities like , ( Swimming pools, Snooker room , balls room , gaming zone area for kids , bar , cricket ground , football ground , squash , badminton , table tennis , card room , restaurants , barbq nights , musicals night , weekends , and Hyderabad gymkhana is popular place which celebrates all kind of popular dates like (Happy new year night) , (Eid special Days) , (Summer camps) , (Independent day) , (Valentine day) , (Christmas day) , and many more . 
Hyderabad Gymkhana contain highly security checking, Guards at gates , car parking security is highly covered , Without member ship card non of any person is allowed to pass the gates , and only those cars can cross the gates which carry sticker of Hyderabad gymkhana given by the committee of gymkhana and members can only carry with them only 1 or maximum 2 peoples with them in there for visit . The whole place is run under rules and regulation. The most restricted rule found in there is, none of person is allowed in sleepers. 
The atmosphere found in Hyderabad gymkhana is very much likable. The Whole system of Hyderabad gymkhana is run by a committee, Which is chosen by members through the process of election, which is based on few seats like (President) Who is leader of whole committee and have authority to take decision of whole gymkhana Hyderabad, and he is responsible for all acts , events , problems of members , security issues , concerts , and environment , and all things in gymkhana are in control of him . and at second its (Vice-president) who is a head post after (president) in his absence , (vice-president) is the chair the seat of whole committee . and these chairs have to serve the members needs and demands , neither they can be dropped in elections , 
In Hyderabad gymkhana all special months are celebrated with themes (example) , In month of Ramadan shareef night match tournament is organized for members . which have winning price for 1st position and runner-ups . And members who face problems in games for them Special trainers are  available , who guide them and help them in training them , In Hyderabad gymkhana most of the members are interested in swimming and for them special trainners are there . 
and Hyderabad gymkhana is one of the places , where people go to fresh there minds . and Hyderabad gykhama provide special packages for there members in restaurant , where they have discount offers on meal . and for member , the facility of Hall is available , where member put seminars ,  celebrate birthdays, parties , children activities  , wedding , mehndi functions and much more with discount for only members . 

For members,  Running and walking tracks are availabe , Gymnaziam for both (male/female) is availabe . and most busy days for gymkhana are the weekend days where peoples come with there families and one weekends  night a music function is arranged where member have there supper and enjoy .