Saturday, August 22, 2015

Feature- Khudabad Mosque by Sadam Solangi- Revised

Revised Feature:  
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 By Sadam Solangi Roll No: 93
    One who enters in the Khudabad Mosque once, he finds himself disappear. It is not because of that there are tunnels and caves, but he disappears in his thoughts to see such a great architecture, art, and elegance of this Mosque. Its work and designs on bricks, stones and peaceful environment that compel people to forget themselves.

Apart from this, Sindh is the famous for its monuments and numerous old historical places which are the parts of its history and cultural heritage. In Sindh, there are a number of places which are worth seeing. Among those places ‘the Khudabad Mosque’ is also one of them. It is situated at Khudabad city (district Dadu), on the right side of Indus Highway and the total area of the Khudabad Mosque is less than one acre. It is away from Dadu such a few Kilometers in southern side.

Three hundred years old Khudabad Mosque was built by the ruler of Sindh, Mian Yar Mohammad Kalhoro(1701-18), when the Khudabad was the capital city of Sindh. Khudabad mosque is very vast and spacious by its area that more than 5,000 people could pray at a time. Along with it, Khudabad Mosque served as a school and place for military training as well. When one enters in the Khudabad Mosque there he will find a main gate, two galleries, one on the left and other on the right side, a huge hall and the big compound wall which surrounds the mosque.  

Now a days, the Khudabad Mosque is suffering from deplorable condition and bit by bit its walls and arch is damaging. It remains inattentive by the government of Sindh since many years.

In 2009 work on protection wall, Wazu khana, CC road was started at a cost of Rs: 10 million. It was an Rs 28 million three year project and one main dome had been restored successfully that collapsed in 1994-95 rains. Substandard work was carried out, and the Department of Archeology Sindh constituted as committee of experts.  Earlier, in 1975, Zulifiqar Ali Bhutto had given 20,000 rupees to repair the Khudabad mosque, when its dome was demolished. The Sindh government should take such measures in order to protect an old legacy of Sindh from further damage.

 Especially, you will find there a great number of visitors on the occasion of Hazrat Lal Shahbaz Qalandar’s Urs Mubarak. The people who usually come from far and wide to visit and get enjoyed to see such an exquisite and prodigious mosque.


 A resident of Khudabad M.Bakshal told that it is very beautiful and spacious mosque around this area. Its elegance and architecture fascinates the people and compel them to visit. Furthermore, he told there is a hearsay about Khudabad Mosque that the mason who had constructed this mosque, he had made a mysterious room for himself. In which he remained one week and no one could find him that where was he. Finally, he left a tiny hole, where from a fly was entering in and out of the room. By this mistake he was found and his one hand was cut off as a punishment.

Practical work carried under supervision of Sir Sohail Sangi
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Revised Feature:  Khudabad Mosque                                                                                                   
 By Sadam Solangi Roll No: 93
    Once one who enters in the Khudaabad mosque, he finds himself disappear. It is not because of that there are tunnels and caves but he disappears in his thoughts to see such a great architecture, art, and elegance of this Mosque. Its work and designs on bricks, stones, peaceful environment that compel people to forget oneself.
Apart from this, Sindh is the famous for its monuments and numerous old historical places which are the parts of its history and cultural heritage. In Sindh, there are a number of places which are worth seeing. Among those places ‘the Khudabad Mosque’ is also one of them. It is situated at Khudabad city (district Dadu), on the right side of Indus Highway, and the total area of the Khudabad Mosque is less than one acre. It is away from Dadu such a few Kilometers in southern side.
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 Khudabad Mosque was built by the ruler of Sindh Mian Yar Mohammad Kalhoro in 1701 to 1718, when the Khudabad was the capital city of Sindh. Rulers of the Kalhora dynasty were religious people. They built many other mosques and tombs, of them one is Shah Abdul Latif’s tomb. Khudaabad mosque is the second largest mosque after the Badshahi mosque (Thatta) which was built by the Shah Jahan in the same era. Khudabad mosque is very vast and spacious by its area that more than 5,000 people could pray at a time. Along with it, Khudabad Mosque served as school as well as for military training.
 In addition , three hundred years old mosque is also the most popular about its architecture, design of its arch, and also the designs of  interior and exterior walls that are made up of the tiles, marble and the cement which was found very rare in that era.  It’s outside look and designs on the walls attract and enchant the visitors and passersby as well.
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When one enters In the Khudabad mosque there he will find a main gate, two gallery’s one on left other on right side, a huge hall and the big compound wall which is surrounded by the mosque.  
Now a days, the Khudabad mosque is suffering from deplorable condition and bit by bit its walls and arch is damaging. It remains inattentive by the government of Sindh since many years. In  2009 work on protection wall, Wazu khana, CC road was started at a cost of Rs: 10 million. It was an Rs 28 million three year project and one main dome had been restored successfully that collapsed in 1994-95 rains. Substandard work was carried out, and the Department of Archeology Sindh constituted as committee of experts.  Earlier,  in 1975, Zulifiqar Ali Bhutto had given 20,000 rupees to repair the Khudaabad mosque, when its dome was demolished. The Sindh government should take such measures in order to protect an old legacy of Sindh from further damage.
 Especially, you will find there a great number of visitors on the occasion of Hazrat Lal Shahbaz Qalandar’s Urs Mubarak. The people who usually come from far and wide to visit and get enjoyed to see such an exquisite and prodigious mosque.
 A resident of Khudaabad M.Bakshal told that it is very beautiful and spacious mosque around this area. Its elegance and architecture fascinate the people and compel them to visit. Furthermore, he told there is a myth about Khudabad Mosque that the mason who had constructed this mosque, he had made a mysterious room for himself. In which he remained one week and no one could find him that where was he. Finally, he left a tiny hole, where from a fly was entering in and out of the room. By this mistake he was found and his one hand was cut off as a punishment.

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  Feature: One who enters he finds himself disappear, Khudabad    Mosque                                                                                             by Sadam Solangi Roll No: 93
 Describe its structure, architecture, area etc.
 Mind it features is always reporting based. Means primary data (your observation and talk with related people), secondary data. Its first function is to entertain and info is secondary function. Talk some  expert and get updated info regarding condition and repair work etc.
Add this with further info: In August 2009, work on protection wall, wazu khana, CC road was started at a cost of Rs10 million. It was Rs28 million three-year project and one main dome had been restored successfully that collapsed in 1994-95 rains. Sub standard work was carried out, and the department of archeology Sindh constituted as committee of experts.
   
 Once one who enters in the Khudaabad mosque, he feels himself disappear. It is not because of that there are tunnels and caves but he disappears in his thoughts to see such a great architecture, art, and elegance of this Mosque. (how? What is that special?)
Apart from this, Sindh is the famous for its monuments and numerous old historical places which are the acids of its history and cultural heritage. In Sindh, there are a number of places which are worth seeing. Among those places ‘the Khudabad Mosque’ is also one of them. It is situated at Khudabad city (district Dadu), on the right side of Indus Highway. It is away from Dadu such a few Kilometers in southern side. It was constructed by the ruler of Sindh Mian Yar Mohammad Kalhoro in 1701 to 1718, when the Khudabad was the capital of Sindh. Rulers of the Kalhora dynasty was the most religious people. They had built many other mosques and tombs, of them one is Shah Abdul Latif’s tomb.
 Khudaabad mosque is the second largest mosque after the Badshahi mosque (Thatta) which was built by the Shah Jahan in the same era.  It is very vast and spacious by its area that more than 5,000 people could pray at a time. Along with it, this mosque served as school as well as for military training. (which mosque?)
 In addition , three hundred years old mosque is also the most popular about its architecture, design of its arch, and also the designs of  interior and exterior walls that are made up of the tiles, marble and the cement which was found very rare in that era.  It’s outside look and designs on the walls attract and enchant the visitors and passersby as well.
 Especially, you will find there a great number of visitors on the occasion of Hazrat Lal Shahbaz Qalandar’s Urs Mubarak. The people who usually come from far and wide to visit and get enjoyed to see such an exquisite and prodigious mosque. When one enters In the Khudabad mosque there he will find a main gate, two gallery’s one on left other on right side, a huge hall and the big compound wall which is surrounded by the mosque.  
 Further, one of the resident told that it is very beautiful and spacious mosque around this area. Its elegance and architecture fascinate the people and compel them to visit. Furthermore he told that, along this road once one who has crossed he became unrest unless to visit this mosque once time.
 Now a days, the Khudabad mosque is suffering from deplorable condition and bit by bit its walls and arch is damaging. It remains inattentive by the government of Sindh since many years. But in 1975, Zulifiqar Ali Bhutto had given 20,000 rupees to repair the Khudaabad mosque, when its arch was demolished.  So that the Sindh government should take such measures in order to protect an old legacy of Sindh from further damage.

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