Referred back. plz revisit and revise
2. The main purpose of feature is to entertain. There is noting like this.
3. Feature should also describe physical feature/ building structure. I t should be compared and contrast with other clubs in Hyderabad, if there is any other club in Pakistan with similarities.
Kamran sario
Roll : 54/MC/2k13
Roll : 54/MC/2k13
Revised
1. U know feature is always reporting based.
mean talk with people, observation plus secondary data. It lacks
first two things, attributions and observation. 2. The main purpose of feature is to entertain. There is noting like this.
3. Feature should also describe physical feature/ building structure. I t should be compared and contrast with other clubs in Hyderabad, if there is any other club in Pakistan with similarities.
4. ur piece is around 670
words of them there are over 100 spelling mistakes, which could have been
corrected by running dictionary. (Some of them I have corrected)
5. Further ur file name was wrong
though i have been repeatedly asking for it. It become very difficult to search
and find it if there is no proper file name. Proper file name should be:
Feature -Kamran
Please
strictly see in next pieces these mistakes should not repeated
Feature / Hyderabad
Gymkhana
Hyderabad is 2nd biggest city of sindh and also a
city with a lot of entertainment places and shopping stuff, In Hyderabad their
are many places for found for public entertainment and Hyderabad gymkhana is one of the best
place found for entertainment in Hyderabad city , which is spread in 4.692
Acres and located on main Thandi Sarrk ( Shahra-e- Fatima Jinnah. , Gymkhana
was found in 1897 which has grown to a
membership strength of about 6000 in 2013. It is basically upon membership
concept and none of local peoples can enter in it without membership.
Due to costly membership, unaffordable local peoples of city Hyderabad can not enter there . and it is famous in Hyderabad due to The class of peoples mostly high gentry families , high profiled peoples are found in Hyderabad gymkhana . it is place Which is full of entertainment and with alot of facilities like , ( Swimming pools, Snooker room , balls room , gaming zone area for kids , bar , cricket ground , football ground , squash , badminton , table tennis , card room , restaurants , barbq nights , musicals night , weekends , and Hyderabad gymkhana is popular place which celebrates all kind of popular dates like (Happy new year night) , (Eid special Days) , (Summer camps) , (Independent day) , (Valentine day) , (Christmas day) , and many more .
Hyderabad Gymkhana contain highly security checking, Guards at gates , car parking security is highly covered , Without member ship card non of any person is allowed to pass the gates , and only those cars can cross the gates which carry sticker of Hyderabad gymkhana given by the committee of gymkhana and members can only carry with them only 1 or maximum 2 peoples with them in there for visit . The whole place is run under rules and regulation. The most restricted rule found in there is, none of person is allowed in sleepers.
The atmosphere found in Hyderabad gymkhana is very much likable. The Whole system of Hyderabad gymkhana is run by a committee, Which is chosen by members through the process of election, which is based on few seats like (President) Who is leader of whole committee and have authority to take decision of whole gymkhana Hyderabad, and he is responsible for all acts , events , problems of members , security issues , concerts , and environment , and all things in gymkhana are in control of him . and at second its (Vice-president) who is a head post after (president) in his absence , (vice-president) is the chair the seat of whole committee . and these chairs have to serve the members needs and demands , neither they can be dropped in elections ,
In Hyderabad gymkhana all special months are celebrated with themes (example) , In month of Ramadan shareef night match tournament is organized for members . which have winning price for 1st position and runner-ups . And members who face problems in games for them Special trainers are available , who guide them and help them in training them , In Hyderabad gymkhana most of the members are interested in swimming and for them special trainners are there .
and Hyderabad gymkhana is one of the places , where people go to fresh there minds . and Hyderabad gykhama provide special packages for there members in restaurant , where they have discount offers on meal . and for member , the facility of Hall is available , where member put seminars , celebrate birthdays, parties , children activities , wedding , mehndi functions and much more with discount for only members .
For members, Running and walking tracks are availabe , Gymnaziam for both (male/female) is availabe . and most busy days for gymkhana are the weekend days where peoples come with there families and one weekends night a music function is arranged where member have there supper and enjoy .
Due to costly membership, unaffordable local peoples of city Hyderabad can not enter there . and it is famous in Hyderabad due to The class of peoples mostly high gentry families , high profiled peoples are found in Hyderabad gymkhana . it is place Which is full of entertainment and with alot of facilities like , ( Swimming pools, Snooker room , balls room , gaming zone area for kids , bar , cricket ground , football ground , squash , badminton , table tennis , card room , restaurants , barbq nights , musicals night , weekends , and Hyderabad gymkhana is popular place which celebrates all kind of popular dates like (Happy new year night) , (Eid special Days) , (Summer camps) , (Independent day) , (Valentine day) , (Christmas day) , and many more .
Hyderabad Gymkhana contain highly security checking, Guards at gates , car parking security is highly covered , Without member ship card non of any person is allowed to pass the gates , and only those cars can cross the gates which carry sticker of Hyderabad gymkhana given by the committee of gymkhana and members can only carry with them only 1 or maximum 2 peoples with them in there for visit . The whole place is run under rules and regulation. The most restricted rule found in there is, none of person is allowed in sleepers.
The atmosphere found in Hyderabad gymkhana is very much likable. The Whole system of Hyderabad gymkhana is run by a committee, Which is chosen by members through the process of election, which is based on few seats like (President) Who is leader of whole committee and have authority to take decision of whole gymkhana Hyderabad, and he is responsible for all acts , events , problems of members , security issues , concerts , and environment , and all things in gymkhana are in control of him . and at second its (Vice-president) who is a head post after (president) in his absence , (vice-president) is the chair the seat of whole committee . and these chairs have to serve the members needs and demands , neither they can be dropped in elections ,
In Hyderabad gymkhana all special months are celebrated with themes (example) , In month of Ramadan shareef night match tournament is organized for members . which have winning price for 1st position and runner-ups . And members who face problems in games for them Special trainers are available , who guide them and help them in training them , In Hyderabad gymkhana most of the members are interested in swimming and for them special trainners are there .
and Hyderabad gymkhana is one of the places , where people go to fresh there minds . and Hyderabad gykhama provide special packages for there members in restaurant , where they have discount offers on meal . and for member , the facility of Hall is available , where member put seminars , celebrate birthdays, parties , children activities , wedding , mehndi functions and much more with discount for only members .
For members, Running and walking tracks are availabe , Gymnaziam for both (male/female) is availabe . and most busy days for gymkhana are the weekend days where peoples come with there families and one weekends night a music function is arranged where member have there supper and enjoy .
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